My legs were beginning to cramp as I sat motionless in my hiding place. I tried to slow my breathing, but I could hear my heartbeat drumming in my ears. I wondered if it could be heard in the deafening silence. I felt my calf muscle tighten painfully and as a reaction, I shifted my weight. The sound echoed and it was my fatal mistake. Enemy team heard me move and were advancing toward me. I fired off three shots and booked it through the trees. I ran under logs and ran up the hill. I got away just in time I saw base camp but it was at least half a kilometer away.That' s a long distance in war. I ran but I tripped over a fallen tree. I got up to find a flank from the enemy team.
Thank god they didn't notice me. I sneaked past them and got to base camp to see that everyone was gone. Either they were all dead or they went out to flank the enemy team. I got more ammo and a new gun. I got prepared for the worst I snuck out just to hear the enemies reach our base camp. They didn't hear me, so I figured that I would be able to sneak away.
I got back to the hill and saw there were three enemy flanks two going around the hill one on each side and the one at our base camp. Since everyone that I saw so far was going to my base camp I decided to go to there base camp and see if anyone was there.
I got to the enemy base camp and no one was there I was behind enemy line with no one to help me. Then all of a sudden I hear unfamiliar voices so I readied myself and slowly started walking toward the noises. It was right there what ever it was I looked behind the bushes to find three enemies I shot two but got shot in the helmet twice. I was out of the paintball war.
Mistakes: They didn't hear me, so I figured that I would be able to sneak away.
ReplyDeleteyou forgot the coma. Otherwise pretty good. But, I have NO clue what flanking means. explain it to me.
I ALREADY DID lol XD
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