My legs were beginning to cramp as I sat motionless in my hiding place. I tried to slow my breathing, but I could hear my heartbeat drumming in my ears. I wondered if it could be heard in the deafening silence. I felt my calf muscle tighten painfully and as a reaction, I shifted my weight. The sound echoed and it was my fatal mistake.... they found and I was taken to the house on the corner of the school. They had bodyguards surrounding the house there was no way to escape. I was tossed in the bedroom and when I looked under the bed I saw a trap door that lead to the bank. When I got out the police surround the hole and they followed the tunnel back to the house. The cops arrested the kidnappers and they went to jail for a long time. Later that day I was taken up to the police station and was asked a bunch of question. The cops were very happy that they caught them that they gave me a award for showing them the tunnel. The next day I went to buy groceries and I saw one of the kidnappers and then he started to run at me and I went and hid in the counter behind the pop. I stayed there all night.
"Get over here right now!"John said,"Don't make me start to shoot this place up."
"I would love to see you do it." Bob said,"What kind of weapon do you have?"
"Does not matter your dead!!!!"yelled John.
"Hahaha!!"Said Bob,"Thats an awesome joke!"
The John spent the whole night looking for Bob.
"I would love to see you do it." Bob said,"what kind of weapon do you have?"
ReplyDeleteafter the "it" there is supposed to be a "," not a dot, and after "Bob said" there is a dot, not a ",". but everything else was good.
"Get over here right now!"John said,"don't make me start to shot (shoot) this place up."
Delete"I would love to see you do it." Bob said,"what kind of weapon do you have?"
"(D)does not matter your(you're) dead!!!!"yelled John(.)
"(ha,ha,ha) hahaha!!"Said Bob,"that's an awesome joke!"
The John spent the whole night looking for (B) bob.