Sam felt the sun shining down on his shoulders while he sat happily by the stream. It was a perfect sunny day and luckily he was spending it with Sarah. Then, all at once Sarah pointed at the water.
“Look Sam!” Sarah exclaimed. “ it is a person floating."
They picked the person up and they looked at her. They realized it was there best friend Brooke...
"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! " said Sam. "Shes dead!"
But what they didn't know was that every Saturday she goes floating down the stream. Sam ran. Then Brooke started to chase him.
Sarah said, "SAM WATCH OUT SHES AFTER YOU!"
They both screamed "Shes a ghost"
But really she was still a live.
They both yelled at her because they thought she was dead!
From that day on they never went back to the stream.
From that day on they never went back to the
ReplyDeleteWhat didn't they go back to? I laughed at this story. I thought it was pretty funny when you said she went floating every Saturday. Good job with your punctuation.
then Brooke started to chase him.
DeleteYou forgot to put a capitol.