Sam felt the sun shining down on his shoulders while he sat happily by the stream. It was a perfect sunny day and luckily he was spending it with Sarah. Then, all at once Sarah pointed at the water.
“Look Sam!” Sarah exclaimed. “It is a....baby cat."
Sam yelled, "We have to go rescue it."
"But how in the world are we going to do that?" asked Sarah. "The water is very very deep here."
The two kids follow the baby cat as it floats down the river with no help.
" I wish we could find something so we could pull it out." sighed Sam.
They keep walking, and five minutes later Sarah yells...
"Look." she said " I found an old net!"
"Great, now we can pull the cat out." exclaimed Sam with excitement.
They carefully cast the net out into the river, but it missed the cat. They try again and this time they catch the cat and carefully pull it to shore.
"Can we keep him?" asked Sarah with hope in her voice.
"Let's do it." answered Sam."Were going to name it Bruce!"
"That's a great name. Let's go home." said Sarah
They take the cat, go home and live happily ever after with the cat.
"But how in the World are we going to do that?" asked Sarah. "The water is very very deep here." The word "world" doesn't need a capital
ReplyDeleteThe two kids follow the Baby Cat as it floats down the river with no help.
"baby" and "cat" don't need capitals
"Great, now we can pull the Cat out." exclaimed Sam with excitement.
"cat" doesn't need a capital
They carefully cast the Net out into the river, but it misses the cat. They try again and this time they catch the cat and carefully pull it to shore.
"net" doesn't need a capital and instead of "misses the cat" I would put "missed the cat"
"But how in the World are we going to do that?" asked Sarah. "The water is very very deep here." The word "world" doesn't need a capital
ReplyDeleteThe two kids follow the Baby Cat as it floats down the river with no help.
"baby" and "cat" don't need capitals
"Great, now we can pull the Cat out." exclaimed Sam with excitement.
"cat" doesn't need a capital
They carefully cast the Net out into the river, but it misses the cat. They try again and this time they catch the cat and carefully pull it to shore.
"net" doesn't need a capital and instead of "misses the cat" I would put "missed the cat"
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